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The Importance of Parallelism

When you use paired conjunctions to connect two words or phrases in a sentence, you need to keep parallelism in mind. What is parallelism? Whenever you connect two items in a sentence with a conjunction, those two items need to be “parallel.” That means the same grammatical structure (noun, verb, adjective, clause, etc.) should follow each part of the paired conjunction. Look at the following examples.

 

Notice that the words or phrases connected by the paired conjunctions have the same word form (or part of speech):

Both weight loss and better postureare benefits of being physically fit.
   noun phrase  noun phrase 

                

Being in good shape not onlyimproves your heart health but alsoincreases your self-image.
  verb phrase verb phrase

           

If you can't go to the gym, try  either taking a short, fast walk orrunning up and down the stairs.
  gerund phrase gerund phrase

                                              

                              

For some people, the road to getting into shape is neither short  nor easy, but it’s worth it.
  adjective    adjective 


                         

Another thing to keep in mind when you use paired conjunctions is the placement of the paired conjunction in your sentence. Look at the two sentences below. In the first sentence, the paired conjunction is placed correctly. In the second sentence, it is not. Why? What’s the difference?

     Correct:  She is not only strong    but also flexible.

 

     Incorrect:  She  not only is strong but also flexible.

 

In this example, we are trying to use the paired conjunction to connect two adjectives: "strong" and "flexible". As a result, we need to put part 1 of the paired conjunction "not only" immediately before the first adjective "strong", and part 2 of the paired conjunction "but also" needs to go immediately before the second adjective.

 

However, if you look at our incorrect sentence, you will notice that the verb "is" appears between part 1 of the conjunction "not only" and the adjective "strong". We are not connecting two verbs; we are connecting two adjectives. As a result, we need to place the two parts of our paired conjunction as close as possible to the items that we are connecting. In this example, it is wrong to place the verb between the first part of the paired conjunction and the word that it is connecting.


Click here for Activity 2:   Use the suggested paired conjunction to connect the two sentences in each item. 

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