Using the Passive Voice
Warm-up Reading
Notice
the use of both the
ACTIVE
and
PASSIVE
voices in the following paragraph. Think about why the
writer uses the PASSIVE voice.

One of
the most enduring symbols of New York City
is
the Empire State Building. This famous structure
is
located
on Fifth Avenue in Manhattan. Construction began in 1930 and
was
completed
in 1931. This enormous building
rises
1,250 feet into the air. It
has
102 stories, most of which
are
used
for offices. The Empire State Building
was
once the tallest building in the world and
became
especially famous as the building from which the original
King Kong (the huge gorilla in the movies)
fell.
Many tourists who
have
ridden
the elevators to the observation deck
have
enjoyed
a fascinating and unforgettable view of New York City.
(Adapted from Refining Composition Skills: Heinle/Heinle)
(Note: "Began" is the proper form of "Was Begun")
Using different forms makes your writing more interesting and varied. This is one of the reasons the writer of the paragraph above used the Passive Voice (see underlined forms). However, in order to use the Passive Voice correctly, you need to know more about the specific circumstances in which we use it. You also need to be sure to use it correctly because it is used in many academic areas, especially social science, natural science and technical writing.
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